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camnine (26)in #writing • 8 years ago
RE: Reading Charles Bukovski's story ( THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WOMAN IN TOWN)
mgaft1... Did he really like Cass for her "personality?" What he says, to me, basically shakes out to Cass' "personality" being some sort of mental situation- from what he…
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camnine (26)in #story • 8 years ago
RE: Original Poem, Don't Blame Me
Mesmerizing, almost metronomic beat. Good rhyme, too. Teensy prob: I'm thinking "their" should be "they're"? Slightly bigger prob: Next-to-last line- beat suddenly…
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camnine (26)in #story • 8 years ago
RE: Hitching through the rural USA? No matter what you believe, the bible might just save your life.
Too bad there are so many witless folks in the world whose idea of "entertainment" is to get plastered and go be someone's nightmare. But, then, there's folks like your own…
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camnine (26)in #writing • 8 years ago
RE: The Reset (An Original Short Story)
Holy, moly! "Noir" meets "Sci-Fi." Who'da thunk? Only, instead of the aspiring "widow" ending her hubby's life to steal his insurance... here, the "widow" ends her hubby's…
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camnine (26)in #writing • 8 years ago
RE: The Scarmaker (An original short story)
A very gentle, very sweet... very "human" story. The writing: thoughtful. The plot: intelligently... elegantly... addressed. A really lovely piece. Thanks so much for…
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camnine (26)in #story • 8 years ago
RE: Ups and downs (An Original Very Short Story)
I'm afraid I couldn't help laughing when I read that line about Franky not minding Tami being pregnant (I guess meaning he would be willing to marry her) because she "knew how to…
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