Hi @tuppence. Great article. Indeed, we tend to underestimate zoonosis. It saddens me also to see so many lives lost to something that we could have prevented if we realised it earlier.
In regards to your article, I think you need to pay attention to two critical things:
-BRUCELLOSIS is also a zoonotic disease caused by a dangerous bacteria called Brucella. It is transmitted even through the simplest routes you may think of such as through breastmilk, skin cut, undercooked meat, contaminated air. Can be gotten from almost all the food animals ranging from sheep, goat, pig, cow and even dog. Its symptoms are also general such as fever of unknown origin, severe headache, pain all over the body etc.
I think you need to put a space between "-" and "BRUCELLOSIS" to make it a point form.
You quote too often. I suggest you try to construct and write by using your word instead of quoting the whole paragraph. There is a specific situation which we can use a quote, for example, definition.
These are just my opinions. Your article is quite good. Good luck and keep it up.
Yes, it is a sad one
Thanks for the suggestions, they are well noted..
Cheers!!