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Why :)?
Just wanting people to check out my article, thank you :)

If you want people to go see your article do it like this: Feel free to check my post about my [trip to Cape Town South Africa] (https://steemit.com/life/@beautybycayleigh/a-trip-to-cape-town) -> put not space between [content name] and (link).
It will look like this: Feel free to check my post about my trip to Cape Town South Africa

And just put a more personal comment (Upvoted and followed is cool, but doesn't mean you really checked the post), so the person feels that your are really interested in what she does, and then, she will come to see your post. :)

Cheers my friend!

Thank you so much!! Really appreciate it