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RE: Finish the Story Challenge!

in #contest6 years ago (edited)

Trembling with fear, and with feelings confused by the strange love I felt; he took his lipstick and wrote on the wall "I must go, our love became an obsession and so it is very difficult to be free". Her husband, Jhon, was of strong character and uncontrolled jealousy, had taken him to beat her to release the hatred he felt when his wife talked and went for a walk with his friends; her behavior was silent, but capable of assassinating him without any compassion, all this combined, those that are leading to a predictable destiny, death.

My entry: Psychopaths in a relationship
This story becomes sinister starring two psychopaths.
I invite you to read it, greetings and good vibes. Good luck for all of you!

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You were inspired friend. You complemented the story well.

I loved. The end has been crazy.

Amazing history and better ending. A quality reading.

I would love to see more works like this!

Excelente hermano. Suerte!!

Muy bien logrado Amigo. Espectacular final. Suerte!!!!

Excelente amigo @josecarrasquero. Te adentraste e hilvanaste muy bien la historia. Saludos!!

Éxitos, mi estimado @josecarrasquero!!