Nice story . The topic you chose is quite interesting for me . Your writing is easy to read ( This does not mean it is elementary) You give a deep description of the scenes , and that makes your story quite "smooth" to follow .
Nice story . The topic you chose is quite interesting for me . Your writing is easy to read ( This does not mean it is elementary) You give a deep description of the scenes , and that makes your story quite "smooth" to follow .