{I shall keep this tab open 'til the Bananafish has enough VP to give a full upvote for what this post is worth.}
- Yellow Queen -
Oh look at how they rave
Begging oh begging t'ere
The Tortillas playin' now
but no one ain't listenin'!
Miley Cyrus- sorry I mean
Hasturr, the Yellow Queen
be blazin' that Yellow sigil
attractin' all the gazes here!
Poor Tortillas, ignorant of this
Lucky Tortillas, spar'd from this
Poor Tortillas, thinkin' they rockin'
Lucky Tortillas, not chased off yet!
And yet with the rules of four now
am I compelled to give a 4th stanza,
so let's give praise and toast to Hasturr
for doing what the Yellow Queen does best!
Beeps-n-giggles aside, I like how yah extract'd the QITR element and us'd it here. Effective-n-unconscious promotion for the QITR, maybe a bit spoiler-y~ Yet, see yah add'd to the HYOPE just nicely.
Comradely love,
Comrade Prof. Dr. Victor
A fourth comment to go with the poem, a CYOA video, like QITR: