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RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part One, Chapter 6 (draft)

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first at Makatu who was standing

first at Matatu who was standing ---- There are a couple different spellings you used Matatu Makatu Matata "Matatu" seems to be the most used spelling.

who in contrast stood feet 60 centimeters apart

who in contrast stood with his feet 60 centimeters apart

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