"...crowded into my brain, threatening to turn it into question mush" a five minute freewrite (Big Bird 33)

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I stood there staring at Katie as she walked down the hallway, hopping neatly over the trip wire.

"Mrs Cherry?" she called.

I had many questions in my mind: 1. why was she wearing a ballerina costume underneath the caterpillar onsie; 2. how did she know Mrs Cherry was here; 3. how did she know Mrs Cherry at all?

...and probably many others that crowded into my brain, threatening to turn it into question mush.

"Hold on!" I said. I followed her, clambering over the tripwire and into the kitchen.

The light was different, I noticed straight away. The cloud above the kitchen table had gone. Not only that, but the kitchen had gone too. I was now standing in a wood paneled room, with a wooden floor and a fire place, also carved in wood. I blinked, confused.

And then I was back in the kitchen, with both Katie and Mrs Cherry looking at me as if I had lost my mind.

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My mind is spinning along with your selfie :)

threatening to turn it into question mush.
constant state of my brain lol

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Good thing this isn't happening in Texas, I would have shot somebody by now. 🇨🇱 All this is cray, cray!

Remind me never to pop round to your place for a cup of tea! ;)

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You'd be safe at my place @felt.buzz

Maybe you had a lot to drink and the booze in your system was messing with you, that's why you felt you were in a different room other than the kitchen

Maybe... things have been a bit weird for a while now! :)

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Whew! It'd be awful to lose the cloud!

I know! All my work lost for good!

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Oh boy!