Your poem has me a bit befuddled, like the speaker it seems. At first I thought it was a beautiful love poem, then second time through it seemed more an unrequited love poem, full of anguish:
Hiding behind the shadow of smiles, reality drifting
I’m coming apart
Then this:
So far away
The distance in the forever range
Forever gone. So sad!
Finally, a wish:
I close my eyes, and my soul smiles
Tossing out the truth for a while
Very moving! Even though the words are strikingly beautiful and of love, your poem leaves me bereft.
Ohhhh! So sorry for the confusing writings. These words were from long ago and far away. Not from the feeling of today, but, words of today. (Did that make sense?)
I thank you for your always deep thoughts and actually taking the time to decipher. I hope you are doing well and that the virus panic isn't impeding your life too badly.
Have a glorious day!
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