The Participants
# 1
@saulos is presenting @isgledysduarte
The freewrite that I liked the most is the one from @isgledysduarte with the "she hid her bruises" prompt. In the brevity of its lyrics she expresses a complete story about a very common theme, but narrated with grace and suspense. It even leaves the end of the story open to interpretation, as I already expressed in the comments I made, because freedom can be won in two ways here, it all depends on who is having tea and what kind of tea it was. So I invite you to read again her post and reflect on it.
# 2
***@doppley is presenting @iamjadeline
My favorite freewrite for the day happens to be one written by @iamjadeline
https://hive.blog/hive-161155/@iamjadeline/she-hid-the-bruises-freewrite.
This short yet vivid write-up features a woman who's probably been abused a lot by her husband and in a bid to end the pain and sorrow she's had to go through decided to end the source. The first scene captures her going to get some materials for a supposed disposal. She left her son asleep at home and tries so hard to hide the reality of what's actually happened from him. Confused as to why daddy's not moving, curiosity sets in and the child begins to ask questions.
# 3
@faith65 is presenting @saulos
I came across a particular freewrite from @saulos. He wrote a piece with the prompt word - 'Delivery' and he delivered on it.
What I like about the freewrite firstly is the cover art which makes a reader want to find out what content one would create with such a painting. I called it an exceptional freewrite because it was finely crafted to keep the reader in progressive suspense while using the most expressive words.
Reading the freewrite made me feel like I was present in the scene, of course in a fictional world where I tangle with my lover to create a world of our own.
@owasco is sponsoring this contest and decided to decline a possible win. Here is her comment
@saulos os has been doing some amazing work this week, but somehow this one from four days ago escaped my attention until today.
Man is this one ever good! He has supplied us with two (freewrite?) paintings (are they paintings?) that are spectacularly mysterious, and has accompanied them with a freewriten mystical journey into the nature of words under a hat.
@saulos has been very generous with us on this one. We get art, magic, philosphy and drama. This is a four in one bonanza, and my favorite from this week.
(My entry is disqualified as I am a sponsor)
Thank you to everyone who participated this week! I hope you will all join us next week, and bring your friends
The Winner
The winner was picked by a random draw tool.
Congratulations to
# 3
@faith65
You won 3 HBI units from the Freewrite House.
A huge THANK YOU to @cliffagreen and @owasco
They are going to pick their favorite entry and sponsor that person to additional HBI. Look in the comments for their choice.
Next Contest starts on Tuesday (pacific time)
Make sure to participate in the Daily Freewrite
Look for this graphics on @mariannewest's profile
Three entrants, and three prizes! @doppley gets 5 hbi from me.
Thanks to everyone who participated in any way!
Thanks for being awesome @owasco :)
Let me know when you receive them please! I'm not so good at this type of thing.
I think you did it wrong lol I haven't received it.
Looks like you already had five hbi, so my addition should bring you up to 10. Does that sound right?
I just checked my hbi status, it says I've got five so far. Thanks for your support @owasco :)
!sbi status
Do you know how to check history? Doppley is new to hbi. He beleives he has received my 5, but the hive has not left my wallet and I haven't received my matching 5.
If the Hive never left your wallet then the transaction didn't reach the chain and would not have been processed by HSBI either. (I don't see any recent transaction in your Hive wallet).
The 5 that @doppley already has are from @freewritehouse, two from September and three from a week ago.
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OK good. It looks right on my end too.
Congratulations @saulos, you are my choice for best comment this week. I felt your comment helped me see and appreciate the ambiguity in the ending of @isgledysduarte's poem. Your review of the poem also made me curious to read it. Good comment.
I'd also like to say, I've enjoyed all of @isgledysduarte's freewrite poems lately; hard to pick just one.
Than you so much, greetings.
@mariannewest, I will sponsor again for one more week. I'd like to make that 3 hbi though, so that the prizes are all of the same value.
Thank you so much!
Congrasts to the winner.... and thank you my dear @salulos and @cliffagreen for you support and motivation, I really appreiate it so much, you maked me happy
You are a winner to.
Congrats to the winner and many thanks to y'all :)
Congratulations to the winner.. Hurray!!
Thank youuuuu!
Thanks everyone. Congratulations to all who entered. I really didn't see this earlier. i'm so glad. I hope to keep recommending freewrites. @freewritehouse the HBI has been received.
https://peakd.com/hive-161155/@deeanndmathews/day-1195-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-stiff-fingers
@deeanndmathews writes about a couple who were once married and now they have rekindled the spark. The man, Thomas is in a hurry to remarry but Velma, his ex, wants to take her time and make sure that Thomas does not fall back on his old ways that caused their split. I like the fact that Velma wants to wait because being back together for 6 weeks is not long enough to see if old habits are going to return.