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Often individuals have a difficult time hearing constructive criticism. They then tend to react in in irrational manner. Perhaps their reactions stems from other reasons not associated with the issue at hand. In any event, sarcasm can sometimes creep into their voices when communicating. It's no wonder the expected responses may come as a total surprise.
I share a microfiction related along this theme for the prompt "tell me something new". The story is a ZAPFIC50 that's told in exactly 50 words. The challenge was created by @felt.buzz.
I based my 50-word story on @mariannewest's Freewrite prompt: 25 october 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2536: tell me something new. If you'd like to join in from the daily prompts, visit @daily.prompt's Profile and view each day's freewrite prompt.
Below is my story.
"What's the yelling for?" Allison shot back as she stepped from the bathroom.
"Nap, nag, nag. It's exhausting. Tell me something new!"
Disgusted with his lack of hygiene, stinky footwear, and dirty clothes piles, she unintentionally heaved a nauseating breath.
"I'm finished degrading myself for you. I can't do filth."
Not All News Is Good News
A menudo, las personas tienen dificultades para escuchar críticas constructivas. Entonces tienden a reaccionar de forma irracional. Tal vez sus reacciones se deban a otros motivos no relacionados con el tema en cuestión. En cualquier caso, a veces el sarcasmo se cuela en sus voces cuando se comunican. No es de extrañar que las respuestas esperadas puedan resultar totalmente sorprendentes.
Comparto una microficción relacionada con este tema para el prompt "cuéntame algo nuevo ». La historia es un ZAPFIC50 que se cuenta en exactamente 50 palabras. El reto fue creado por @felt.buzz.
Basé mi historia de 50 palabras en el tema «Freewrite» de @mariannewest: 25 octubre 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2536: tell me something new. Si quieres participar en las sugerencias diarias, visita el perfil de @daily.prompt y consulta la sugerencia de escritura libre de cada día.
A continuación mi historia.
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No todas las noticias son buenas
"¿A qué vienen esos gritos?, replicó Allison al salir del baño.
«Nap, nag, nag. Es agotador. Cuéntame algo nuevo».
Asqueada por su falta de higiene, su calzado apestoso y sus montones de ropa sucia, exhaló sin querer un suspiro nauseabundo.
"Ya he terminado de degradarme por ti. No puedo hacer guarradas «.
The screenshot at WORDCOUNTER.net evidences my use of exactly 50 words to create my ZapFic50.
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If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.
I am a man which I am totally proud to be, and in spite of that, I am a very tidy man, I don't like clutter at all, and I don't like to leave my clothes lying around like that,
I agree, let him know his shortcomings, and the way he is so unpleasant.
I agree. Cleanliness is important for yourself and for others around you. So don't get angry if you're called out on it. Thanks so much for stopping by and lending your thoughts. I appreciate it. Take care.
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