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RE: Travel in the morning to the beach to see the natural atmosphere

in Worldmappin3 days ago

Hi! I want you to know that I chose your post because the pictures are very nice, but please take care of the writing next time :) Only in the first paragraph of the post you said ‘friend’ 15 times and ‘cellphone’ 9 times.

With good writing and good pictures, the post could be even more valuable ;)

Cheers!

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Thank you very much for your support, and I am very grateful for the advice you gave, and I will try to do better in the future.