Only ache comes from a heart with a made up mind
Fed up with the silence verdict I unjustly have signed
Then I stupidly decided to tell her that buried secret
Complaining to her about a heart she left mesmerized
I looked into her eyes and saw only my fire in its reflection
She told me that my love for her is forever denied
She was my life and when her verdict was rejection
It would have been more merciful had I died
Every poem I write, say and think
Comes from the beauty of your eyes
And the warmth your hand pours
These poems aren't just dry ink
They are the place your smile lies
They are from you, they are all yours
These poems are love lasting years
These are longing, music, and tears
These are the days we spend together
They are the falsehood of forever
Without your love, nothing makes my heart cheers
Every poem I write, say and think
Comes from the beauty of your eyes
And the warmth your hand pours
These poems aren't just dry ink
They are the place where your smile lies
They are from you, they are all yours
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It's great to have a creative muse! Awesome poem.
Thank you, I appreciate your comment.
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You repeated this lines and actually this words demand it. How nicely you exposed your feelings in the dry inks. What a romantic mind you have! I am just amazed and even a little bit worried that why not me.. lol
I figured it would make a great re-enforcement of the point of desperation. Thank you for the comment. I am glad you liked it.
Great job, it express the pain and the undying love for the lover. It's a great poem for expressing heartbreak
Thank you for your kind comment, I am glad you liked it.
Wow, I read it carefully, every line of it. Feeling some pain in the words, the emotions that leaves you speechless. Amazing, well done!
Wow, thank you for reading first. Secondly thanks for your comment, both are greatly appreciated.
I am really thankful that you liked it.
Beautiful - heartbroken.