The music worked :) Quite beautiful and effective. You certainly do show, and share. We feel the sorrow, the history, the memories. You drop a clue in the middle that the narrator is no longer among the living, but it is a gentle clue. Truly, the story does read like a symphony, with an prologue, climax and resolution.
Thank you for sharing this with us, @deraa. We very much appreciate your significant engagement with other authors.
Thank you very much @theinkwell❤️🙂