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RE: The InkWell Prompt #80; The Long Wait...

in The Ink Well3 years ago

You really do show exhaustion and depression in this story. Your character portrayal is definite, but not over the top. The resolution is realistic. It is satisfying, not only because we are happy for the doctor, but also because we find it believable.

Great use of the prompt and skill target.

Thank you for sharing this story with us. Have you commented on the stories of at least two other authors in the community? We expect this of the writers we support. Thank you!

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Thanks for the tips on how to improve, I will keep trying to get better with every prompt.