Thank you for sharing your story with us in The Ink Well. Alexis and Mamanda rely on Zoba and she delivers perfectly for years. It’s great that she gets the opportunity to study and it’s nice that she stays with the family and has the keys to let them in when they’re locked out - that was a sweet touch.
You might need to proofread your writing to edit Zoba’s name from Zona to Zoba.
One evening, she assigned Zona to help complete the task and she did it so perfectly.
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Thank you, @theinkwell. I appreciate your candid comment, I will make the correction where necessary.