Ha ha ha. Apparently Dorian does need micromanaging. He has let working from home affect his professional demeanor a little too much, perhaps. As a matter of fact, it seems he has no professional demeanor any more.
The details in your story are great. Details bring the scene home, they make the characters live.
One scene that stuck out as possibly a contradiction was the one where you mention the workers meeting after work. During the pandemic, this is a surprising development, especially with half the world's population wiped out.
Good story. Good management of the prompt. Thank you for sharing this with us and for engaging with other authors in the community.
Thanks for your feedback, it is very helpful. I read a few of the Inkwell guides before starting which gave some great pointers.
Thanks for your support and engagement. 🙂