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RE: Other side of Goodbyes

in The Ink Welllast month (edited)

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You have an interesting perspective on saying goodbye, @sabiukpa. You have tagged your story as fiction, but there doesn't seem to be a story here. A story has an arc--a beginning, a crisis, and a resolution. This is more an exposition on ways to say goodbye. Also, you address the reader directly, which is not advised in a story.

We hope these pointers will help you to fashion your stories more effectively in the future.

Thank you. Keep writing!

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Thank you, noted. Errors that won't repeat itself.