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RE: Dreamy Night: A Villanelle

in #poetry6 years ago

The ABAB pattern you adhered to throughout made the work beautiful... My view from this poem is that of a child seeing a simple world("black and white with no grey") with simple thoughts being bombarded by the ever changing world.. This poem is that of a child struggling to hold on to innocence in a pool of change
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Great interpretation! Glad you liked it.

You're welcome.... I hope to read more