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RE: Life as I know it||origional poetry

in #poetry7 years ago

Great one , but I think the last picture is not the right one it misleads, because in your text you say "I will keep going on" and then the picture of girl on the floor. The pictures should bee connected with text. Like visualization of text, to let people kinda be a part , be there with you. Something like that. Thanks for shearing with us.

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Thanks friend for nice words and advice you are right the last picture is not connected text.actually I take pictures from pixabay today I was in hurry and there I can,t find some good picture therefor I upload it