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RE: Secrets untold

in #poetry7 years ago

Your metaphors are riddles stuck in rhymes and stanzas. One has to pay attention to the deeper meaning of words. It is a beautiful well-written piece...

Many kneel and some feign tall

The depth of that line stood out.

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Thank you Tez

One has to pay attention to the deeper meaning of words.

I agree. if people spent a little more time on depth, they would see things that change their ways.