Hi @stellabelle :) I'm pretty new here and first of all, I want to thank you for this text. Very inspiring. I had very similar thoughts when I was joining here, especially about karma and fearlessness. Keeping that in my mind, I wanted my first "big" post to be both about the area that I know and motivation to others. So, I created the text that I had in my mind for some time, thinking it will really get atention and help/motivate some people of our community. I posted this text yesterday and I heard it is too long... I had to be honest, it demotivated me a little bit. Don't get me wrong, I know those are my first days here, but still...
Can you please take a look and maybe tell me what I did wrong there? Here is the link https://steemit.com/motivation/@imperfect-one/move-yourself-1
Thank you in advance, I will follow you from this point :) Wish you all the best!