Well, what an interesting read!
My mother always told me that when I wanted to communicate with someone using written words, like writing a letter, that it was always better to write as if you were talking directly to the the person.
I've always found that it seems to work and now in the age of technology, blogging, text messaging etc (etc means - all those other things I can't be bothered writing down) we are writing more and more like we are talking directly to the other person. That's why I liked your post. You were talking to me!
I want to hear more so I'll be following you.
Maybe you'll follow me, I don't post or comment much at the moment but I'm slowly getting used to talking with the written word again.