Are You My Whale?

[stbrians]

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• It is my intent to in steemit to seek
  A great whale to offer me a shoulder
  Because I understand am weak
  A whale will make me bolder
  Things may look so hard and bleak
  I sought a mentor and moulder

• I have nothing to offer
  But a very tiny upvote
  Life here gets rough and tougher
  As minnows are left but to rot
  Minnows seek no scoffer
  They need their content to spot

• One day they will be a whale

They will mentor a minnow

Whales should not be for sale

They should sieve and winnow

Never make them stale

But allow them to know

• A whale may retire
  From being an influence
  Let drop their attire
  On a minnow with essence
  The minnow will glow afire
  And full of great sense.

@poetsunuted

@iwrite

Comments

[nuridin]

Very nice rhyme with motivating meanings... Did you write those poems?

[keya]

Yeah, just pastimes. It is fun. My dad enjoys writing poems

[stbrians]

I love writing funny pieces of poetry

[stbrians]

True Allan @keya

[nuridin]

well done... come join us at #poetsunited ... you'll love it there

[stbrians]

Yeah, I will

[flashfiction]

Cute. Will some whale hear the call? :)

[stbrians]

They usually hear

[asyrafahamed]

This is a great poem and I believe some whales will notice this post. I will resteem this post as well.

[stbrians]

Thanks

[maxwell95]

This is an absolutely great piece of work...

[stbrians]

Great

[sirkim]

Its a beautiful piece. Keep writting