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RE: AppLock, an app that helps you maintain your privacy

in #utopian-io5 years ago

Thank you for your contribution. However, I had quite a few issues with the post.

First, the post is not informative. Also, the whole content is like a summary of a blog post. It is valuable that you share your experiences, thoughts, and the app's unique features.

Further, on the presentation side, the post had many issues. Aside from the grammar issues, there are many proofreading issues in the post. I would be happy to cite some examples in a follow-up comment. Still, I suggest that you check your future texts in Grammarly to minimize issues.

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Thank you for the corrections.

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!