Very well written, simple started with usually normal life scene, but slowly became weird. While reading I started to feel a tension in me, suspicion of something unusual to come, it is like in a real psychothriller, it may be not scary but when author manages to keep the people under tension and in waiting for something unavoidable that is the master piece of great thriller authors. You story has it, like that effect and especially the open end, so that the people just create their own ending in their mind. Great writing!
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Thank you! I like to left the ending open so people can end it the way they want :)