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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • 10 months ago
RE: If you can’t fight, fly!
The feelings of longing, insecurity, and heartbreak are so relatable. It's tough when you're deeply into someone but struggle to find the courage to express those feelings.
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • 10 months ago
RE: The Worst Home Run Ever
It starts with the protagonist enjoying the simple pleasure of watching neighborhood baseball games. But things take a dramatic turn when a stray baseball lands in a mysterious…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • 10 months ago
RE: Torn through rejection
The imagery of Daisy running through the woods, tears streaming down her cheeks, encapsulates her emotional turmoil vividly.
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • 11 months ago
RE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #161
Contest entry: Supported @lightpen, @iskawrites and @jazclassic
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • 11 months ago
RE: Pickled mushrooms
The story transitions to Kola's home life, where we learn his grandmother laments that drying mushrooms ruins their flavor. This sets up the conflict that pickling can resolve.…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • 11 months ago
RE: People don't change - situations reveal their true nature
Skillfully employs vivid descriptions, such as Ejiro's comically oversized clothing and distinctive speech impediment, to bring the characters to life and make them memorable.…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • 11 months ago
RE: Her craving and dreams.
The descriptions really bring the scenes to life, from the wife "fighting with the fridge" to find her pickles to her excitement when finally reunited with the beloved pickles.…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: I Experienced That Sweet Love Again
The message about a mother's love being unconditional and everlasting is clear and resonates with the reader. Thanks for sharing...
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #148
Here's my entry: commented on: @vivaebony, and @princess-dara
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: The proposal
The public proposal scene brings George's willingness to commit full circle. Capturing the joyous moment, strangers validate the milestone the couple has reached after overcoming their disconnect.
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: My Spotlight
The author seems to come full circle, as she ends up being contacted to do a professional music cover, indicating she has regained strong enough confidence in her abilities to…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #147
Here's my entry:
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: A Digital Escape
Using evocative metaphors like gaming worlds as "closest things some of us will ever have to being cast in a movie" emphasizes their role as an imaginative escape. This also ties…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: Escape to the party - TheInkwell Creative NonfictionPrompt #60
Her conversations with Lisbeth and Maria show ingenuity but also tensions around defiance. The mother comes across as both caring (making the girls breakfast, letting the…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: T
The twist where the young man decides to selflessly use all his wishes to help the others, thereby losing his own chance at riches, is unexpected and contains a moral lesson. Thanks for sharing.
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: Escape: A Needed Factor In Turmoil
The dialogue with the officers comes across as authentic. We can imagine the panicked pleading on the author's part and the stern questioning by the officers. The sudden change…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: The tight 4
The supporting characters like Nancy, Anthony and Ijeoma are a bit underdeveloped but help move the plot along by revealing Victor's betrayal, trying to reconcile the friends…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: HARMONY.
Forgiveness can be difficult, but holding onto anger only hurts us in the end. I'm glad to hear you were able to reconnect with Tayo after all these years. It takes courage to…
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: The Photo Album
Thank you very much!😊
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cedujem (54)in The Ink Well • last year
RE: Her Haunting Smile (Nonfiction)-Inkwell Nonfiction Prompt 55
The conversational tone makes it feel like the narrator is recounting the experience directly to the reader, drawing us in... The build-up of suspense is effective - starting…
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