PostsCommentsPayoutsgriff (64)in #writing • 7 years agoRE: Muse (Original Short Fiction)Thank you for the response. Sorry for the delay, I've been off Steemit for a while. Just getting back into the swing of things. I agree completely about the last paragraph…griff (64)in #contest • 8 years agoRE: Lazy Wednesday - Easy 10 STEEM Giveaway! STAR WARS NameFit-Qu Ch-Cha It almost sounded like a real Jedi name until it turned into a jaunty dance. You throw your arms out front like a Rancor claw, then you Force Push up -- that's the Fit-Qu Ch-Cha.griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Cold Heart (Original Short Fiction)I'm glad you're enjoying them!griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Cold Heart (Original Short Fiction)Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Ex-Somnus (Original Short Fiction)Thank you!griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Malaise of Youth (Original Short Fiction)Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.griff (64)in #life • 8 years agoRE: Occulted Truth #5The way you phrased your post suggested that the "latter portion" was supposed to be support for the conclusion in the "former portion". I was pointing out that it wasn't. Your…griff (64)in #life • 8 years agoRE: Occulted Truth #5Neither the word "god" or "devil" have any etymological history with the words "good" or "evil". Both words are derived from other languages (Old English, German, Latin, Greek).…griff (64)in #history • 8 years agoRE: Boskop Man: Ancient Humans With Extraordinarily Large Skulls - How Smart Were They?I was actually going to post something along these lines. Brain size != intellect. That's been shown through repeated tests. Even among humans, larger brains only equate to…griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Memorandum In MemoriamThanks! I'm trying to experiment a little bit with storytelling methods. I'm glad you liked how this turned out.griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Incident Report 08-03-53I certainly appreciate it, but I wouldn't think this is one of the more interesting parts of the story, unless you've followed the whole thing. With that in mind, I'll be posting…griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Transmission Log 07-20-53 | /*RESTRICTED FILES*/Hah, thanks.griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Mission Log Epsilon-Beta-Two | /*Project: Eden*/Thanks! It's not quite done yet, but stick around. I'll be posting more in the next few days.griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Research Report 07-01-53 | /*Project: Eden*/I'm notoriously bad about leaving comments, but I do follow your posts, so I'll try to drop some in the future.griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Research Report 07-01-53 | /*Project: Eden*/Glad to hear it. I thought the unorthodox storytelling would put people off, but stick with it over the next several days to see where it's going.griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: NaNoWriMo Excerpt #3 -- The Girl (Outwilds)The birthmark is actually an important plot point. Believe me, I wouldn't have included it if it didn't have some real significance. EDIT You are right about it being…griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: NaNoWriMo Excerpt #1 -- The Dealer (Somnolence)I guess I should have clarified, but this isn't the beginning of the novel. This particular excerpt actually comes from near the end of the book. I led off with this excerpt…griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Darkness, Foe; Darkness, Friend (Original Short Fiction)You're right, it's ugly to look at. My original thinking when I wrote it was that it was one continuous experience -- one small piece of a child's life -- so it should run…griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: Darkness, Foe; Darkness, Friend (Original Short Fiction)Rereading this, saying it was an "experiment" is not entirely accurate. It was a writing exercise. I wanted to see if I could start a story with the phrase "It was dark", then…griff (64)in #story • 8 years agoRE: The Wrecking Light (Original Short Fiction)Thank you!