Rereading this, saying it was an "experiment" is not entirely accurate. It was a writing exercise. I wanted to see if I could start a story with the phrase "It was dark", then write something interesting without relying on visual descriptions. This was the result. I hope it was worth a read.
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I saw this and had to reread it too-- I like the flow of it, and didn't catch the lack of visuals the first time. Nice job, I enjoy your style a lot.