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RE: ADSactly Short Story - And Die (story part 2)

in #adsactly6 years ago

Bro, the story was too long and I had to split it into two. This was my first time having to do this but I think it panned out well. Well, I really needed Peter to return and learn his lesson but having read about the efficacy of the Law in Dubai, I could not think of any logical way of freeing him so I resorted to magic. Peter learned his lesson and he would not push drugs again even if the world was promised to him. I hope others learn the same lesson too.

Thanks a lot @bosscharlze, you're appreciated.