Hello @royalrose
I'm not the first time reading your stories and want to tell you that you are a very talented writer, continue to develop your skills, you have a good imagination.
today's story turned out pretty tense. The main qualities on which I value stories are the presence of the atmosphere, the ability to co-create the main characters (or how the author reveals his characters) and immersing himself in reading (when you read a good story, you do not notice how time passes). In your story it is. You created an excellent but at the same time tragic atmosphere. The plot and characters are also made well, it is intriguing. Especially liked the finale of history.
Yes, I, like many sad for the death of Lucy.
So I thank you for your work, I liked it.
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I'm grinning from cheek to cheek right now. I'm immensely grateful for your kind words. Thank you.