Good story, @greenrun! In spite of the unpleasant situation of police harassment, he is sympathetic thanks to the black humour that animates him, in his denouement and in the narration of the main character. The presentation of the arbitrary and abusive behavior of police officers, very common in our countries (not to mention Venezuela, where police and criminals are confused), is very appropriate. In addition, an adequate use of informal language in the dialogues. Cunning and opportune skill can also help us. Thank you for sharing. Greetings.
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