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RE: ADSactly Poetry - When the rain comes...

in #adsactly6 years ago (edited)

Good job, interesting choice


writing that presents the rain as poetry inspiration. When reading the poem that you reviewed, I immediately remembered the rain that always came with the season. In our tropical country we know the rainy season and the dry season. When it first rains we will feel the smell of the earth splashed with drizzle. A typical smell that reminds us of deep longing. Like dry land that longs for rain suddenly comes droplets of water from the sky making a longing for cash.
When raindrops flow between the window slits or see the flow of water from the roof makes us miss the childhood playing in the rain, running or even dancing.
There is excitement that is so overflowing that we do not need to dodge by hiding behind the umbrella. This joy exceeds the pain of getting sick after the rain.
Likewise the sound of rain on the roof or the roof of the house gives a beautiful and lively feel and rhythm so you want to go out to just catch the flow of water from the roof of the house.
only because it is not wise to act, then the longing for rain as a child is now lost by the many floods. Hopefully not to lose our sanity to do. not then blame the rain when the flood disaster comes


thank you steemit
Warm regard from Indonesia thank you @nancybriti Thank you @adsactly

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Very beautiful comment, @rokhani. I think everyone has a particular experience with rain. It's true, I imagine that some people will blame the rain for some disasters, without thinking that it is the unconsciousness of man that causes some tragedies. Thank you for always commenting.