Great post.
you opened the story with anxiety of a mother who gets a call from his son for ask for help and then the dial stopped. the plot flows very naturally but can hook my mind. an you success to sucked reader feeling as we include in the story.
warm regard from Central java -Indonesia
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Hello @rokhani from Central Java, I'm happy you find the story interesting.
you develope the story well and it's interesting to read your short story.