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RE: African infrastructure development - a nutcracker suite (Part 1 of I'm not sure how many yet)

in #africa7 years ago

It would depend on your target audience! If it's people who know they need this service and these specific capabilities, spot on. Unfortunately, there's probably a much bigger peep pool which has no idea what a subordinate clause is and why the overuse of same is a Bad Thing.

How about a one-liner which captures your brand promise, along the lines of "Good to the last line!" (I don't know if Ricardo Montalban played well over here in the 80s....)

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Interesting, I also heard not to end a sentence with a preposition.