Ooty is a small town and there was a girl is her name Lizzy, she had a friend whose name is Rakesh, both were friends since childhood. Lizzy went to Mumbai for training after finishing her medical degree, while Rakesh working as wing commander in Indian Air force at Mumbai and living his bachelor life at first class quarters.
Lizzy told Rakesh that she was coming to Mumbai and was going to stay there at the hostel for medical practice. One day Rakesh had to go to Pune for some official purpose. He thought to call Lizzy to take her with him if she have free time.
Hello! Lizzy here...
Hi Lizzy how are you? Hope you doing well.
Of course Rakesh! how do you do?
I am good, Tomorrow I have to go to Pune for official work, going alone in the car is boring , are you free and able to come with me?
There is nothing to do here, I also want to see Pune, I heard Mumbai to Pune high way is very good to drive and sight seeing.
Okey! I'll pick you up you in the morning. Bye.
Bye.
Next morning rakesh went to pickup her, she wore a beautiful top and leggings and came to sit in his car and they both moved to Pune. The car went out of the city and moved towards highway, it was great location both side green landscape, they were enjoying driving. they talked a lot about their childhood, their college life, about their friends, colleagues and more.
Lizzy knew that he had no girlfriend so far, even though she asked him, Rakesh if you don't mind can i ask you some thing?
Yes! please
Do you have a girl friend now?
No, I have not seen her yet.
How do you feel about her? or what is your expectations?
When you see a girl, a thousand butterflies appear to be in the mind, a lightning in the brain, then only you realize that you are in LOVE, I haven't met that kind of girl yet.
Did not you feel anything like seeing me?
You are my best friend and I never see you in that way.
They both were silent, car running on the hill station, he parked the car at one restaurant they had lunch. After the refreshment they moved again towards Pune. They enjoying hill roads and nature environment, a melody song played in the car.
Rakesh! if you don't mind can I ask you some thing again?
Hey! be frank common.
Are you virgin?
he was silent for few mnitues
its okey! if you do not want to tell.. sorry for asking.
No its not, And sex feeling is not beyond us, we could control it even if an Apsara(Beautiful Goddess) come in front of us.
Oh really! Maybe a woman, naked in front of you, will keep your emotions up?
Of course Yes, I do not mean that I'm a Gay but i could control my emotions.
'Lint and fire cannot together,' she said
She divert talk to different topics, they reached Pune and it was 5 O'clock in the evening. After official work done they went for restaurant to have some snacks. He said 'Its already late and its not good to ride on highway at night time'.
'What else can we do?', she asked.
'Can we stay here for spend one night, and we'll leave here early in the morning'.
She agreed after a long thought .
'I trust you because you said you could control yourself ....hahaha'. she said and laughed.
They both went to the guest house, the room has one double bed and air conditioned. They watched some programs on TV, he called room service and ordered some rotis and gravy for Dinner.
After the dinner they both sit on the bed until they felt sleepy, they don't have any additional cloths to wear, he only removed his shirt and hanged it to wear for tomorrow. She said 'Rakesh! lets put off light and TV so that I can remove my top because I too not have an additional top to wear for tomorrow'. Immediately he switched off all lights and TV.
She removed only her top as she wore a slip and bra inside, the heat began to spread even though they were in the air conditioned room. She laid beside him at least a feet distance, he was humming some melody song.
They couldn't sleep, he was shivering as she laid beside him without wearing a top. Though he could not see her body looks in the dark night, he started to imagine her beauty. She was also embarrassed as she laid half a naked near a man.
Lizzy!, he called her in husky voice.
'mm' she reply without any word.
I was wrong that i could control my self.
'why, what happens' she whispered
"My body shivering'
'I feel fever and my temperature raised'. she replied
He slowly put his fingers on her forehead to check the fever, then to her neck. she hold his palm on her cheek and then kissed, they get closer, he rubbed her back, she kissed his chest, he also kissed her forehead, both closed their eyes, both were kissing romantically.
She felt some amazing touch to her body, he felt like heaven. They both together lost themselves, as well as lint and fire together. "Now I see the girl, I feel thousand butterflies appear in my mind, a lightning in the brain...... I love You" he whispered. I love You toooo.....
Thank you for reading my post, please don't forget to upvote if you like this. Through this post I would like to thank all my well wishers, supporters and upvoters.
Gr8 post
thank you
Good
thank you
and... who is lizzy?
its a cast
@jyoti-thelight sounds a romantic love story
yes i write all types of stories for all types of audience
Very bold story. I really like it.
But I am wondering what happens next.
Please do write about that.
Yeah! i wrote its conclusion, indirectly i meant it that they fell in love. Actually the subject was how a self controlled friends become lovers under the circumstances. an my theme was no one escape from god created attractions and his situations, may be its all about fate.
100% upvote ..good story. I enjoyed the happy ending !!
Thank you for reading and comments
Hi @jyoti-thelight,
This was an intense story to say the least! I liked that there was some humor, but also portrayed something that a lot of young people go through, in wondering if their friend would one day be their lover. Everything has a place and time, and I think you did a great job on the execution of the ending!~
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Beautiful writing my dear! :)
wow! I was expecting that you have visit my blog... thank you for reading
My pleasure :)
Very spicy! I love the tension that you built in the story and the art that you chose to illustrate your story were perfect as well. Great post!
thank you! for the appreciations
What a beautiful and interesting story.
Thank you very much @jyoti-thelight
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Nice story
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nice post...
thank you
nice art upvoted
thank you
I agree - the artwork you chose was perfect for this passionate story. Well done!
thank you for the apreciations
You're very welcome, @jyoti-thelight
Awesome read!
thank you
Lovely romantic story! With great artwork that matches perfectly!
thank you very much for reading and supporting
Wow what a great story i really like it.
But what happened next?
that was the end, i wrote its conclusion, indirectly i meant it that they fell in love.
Pathetic grammar. But great story.
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thank you i will use the tag in next posts
So romantic... :)
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like it text and pic too ^^
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I like this @jyothi
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Quite a passionate and romantic story. Good job!
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Lol, nice story. I could feel the fire of their romance here 😁😁. Kudos @jyoti-thelight
I'm glad they found each other after all!
Sparks and fire to get you through the night!
Terrific writing :)
Wonderfully written story. Perfect illustrations. Keep up the great work!
Nice histoty dear, upvoted!
This is a lovely story,I enjoyed reading it. Nice art!
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