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Do your friends draw? Do they know how tricky it is to build the right facial proportions?:)
In fact the only thing I can say - try to avoid using lined paper for your art practices. It makes everything look strange.

they don't know this but this is what friends are for ..!! Actually I was getting bore in my class so just tried .. well yea sure I'll avoid next time ..
thanks ..

@akareem I like that strange style !!!!!!!! really interesting ^ ^

Ohh thank you so much