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RE: Zion: The newborn. ( an original poem)

in #art8 years ago

The world, that opens up ahead, those
Pecan trees, will witness it exist
Flat hills, sunflower beds
The Salted seas, will welcome it again.

This painted a nice picture for me. Loved everything you chose. I also really just love the word Zion haha great poetry

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I had the hardest time with that part of my poem to be honest.
thanks for appreciating it!

my pleasure!