Who is it?
Just a shadow
Of her
Flying away
Having nothing
But memories
Burried deep in the heart
Sweet promising memories
About them
Innocent kids
Lost in the arms of love
Living in own world
Chasing their dreams
Far away from wicked souls
This is my first poem, I have never written anything similar before but this picture that I took in Zadar, on the coast of the Adriatic sea made the words come out from my soul so please don't be afraid to tell me what do You think about it. I appreciate all comments and opinions especially the critical ones that will motivate me to write more and improve.
Thanks a lot for reading!
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Greetings to all!!!
Beautiful..
Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it :)
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Zadar - Hitchcock said Zadar has the most beautiful sunset. Beutiful pic, love the poem
Thanks man, I am glad that you like it :) That is really interesting fact.