C A P S U L E
C O S M
Forever
motionless capsule
where time has never begun.
Nothing
has ever changed.
Nothing
has ever been born.
Eternal, this
conceptless unknown.
With infinite hunger,
it obliterates self-knowledge.
Geometry, physics, mathematics:
It extinguishes linearity.
Crushes rationality.
Cannibalizes intellect.
Scapegoats the hanging world
Of dust and procreation.
Flicks the droplet of humanity
& their watery magnetism
Off its hands.
Planets its billiard balls,
Asteroids its pond pebbles,
Galaxies its dim dowry,
Voidfulness its bride.
Hey @d-pend! I REALLY think that when you collaborate with photographers so that you are using ORIGINAL images with your poems, it really takes your work to a higher level. I suggest this be the next MAJOR aspect of your work that you develop. For me, I am ACTUALLY a photographer, and so have been using MY OWN photos (collected over YEARS) and then adding the poetry now. I think that "photo poems" are a valuable form of content on Steemit. Hope to see more of this...
Once again you provide quite valuable feedback and food for thought. Thank you very much @transcript-junky! I agree. I want to begin taking more of my own photos in the near future to use, as well. Hopefully I will be purchasing a nice camera pretty soon :)
Right on. Just keep in mind that you can START with a mobile phone camera. Most of them will do the job adequately while you save up for a more proper camera. I find that the photography process also adds another dimension to the poetry writing. I'm sure you will discover this as you proceed...
@d-pend this poem the everything and nothing are described within the cosmos. @gold84
Wow @d-pend been a long time buddy, this is another belting write up.
The images are divine, the imageries and word chemistry is awesome, i love this ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Hi @josediccus, great descriptor you've got there. "belting." I don't hear that much! Is it british slang? Anywhoo, thanks very much! Have a great day.
It is sir, it means strong impact buddy, keep on writing the good stuff.
Your poems are too sweet too not to be enjoyed
And it is a complement believe me
♚
Yes, it is a priority for me that it looks aesthetically pleasing, so I'm glad you like it!
Not everyone likes to read, but everyone likes to look. :-D
Thanks omar!!
~ You are most welcome my bro. ~
☔☞☀☺
Wow, that makes me very happy to know. Sometimes it seems such a tiny difference we can make, but even a small display of kindness can be quite powerful.
Wholeness!
INDEED MY BRO.
❀
@d-pend
i forget to teal you
✿ -- happy thanksgiving -- ✿
please forgive meIncredible poem you always blow me away! I hope you had a beautiful thanksgiving Daniel🌷
Thank you so much! I had a wonderful day, hope you did too :-D
Great writing style. Your words and art touch the soul. We need more of this in this world. Keep it up. Thanks.
Fly words perfection - incredible aspect of soul poetry.
Thats amazing
Pics looking very amazing
Priceless
Gratitude
writting, art and the photo everything really good, i appreciate all, thanks for such a things..
Thank you for stopping by :)
Nice work
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