It would be easier for someone to see your painting without your own judgement :) You picked up all those small 'mistakes' and then it's not easy to look at it and don't see it :) BUT luckily I saw it before I read your text and I must say that I like it a lot. She is beautiful and in total harmony with her surroundings. I like the deep colors and the dark mood (maybe there is no dark mood and it's just me :))
Thank you for sharing and have a good day!