wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you totally captured that mood and the story drew me in! hehehehe
I love that you invited your readers to add to the story! hmmmm might have to try ;)
and you did - you really captured the mood of what you were going for. It's amazing as I read the adjectives that you described - i was thinking yep yep yep! that's exactly what I see on her face AND what I feel when I look at her!
and i would not have even noticed that little gem in the moon! hehehehe very cool idea to subtly put the dragon there!
nice work - as always, my friend :)
(sorry i've been a teeny bit quiet - i've been going nuts with mailing lists. i hate learning new programs hahahahaha) but i will be better at visiting your blog ;) 3 days is way too long to get here!
No worries, you've been busy. Glad you stopped by, and I hope you do add a paragraph or two. Like to see where you take it. Plus, your writing is a lot better than mine, sooooo, lol.