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That last one which is so dark I can barley make out the other side lines just the middle, looks really neat.

Thank you for this feedback @cryplectibles I appreciate it.

Thank you for posting @finder. How about trying the first one in bleu. It has a lot of energy.

Like this?

That works....what do you think?

and try bleu squigglies as well for a side by side test, if you care to.

Yes in blue is awesome! My favourite <3