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RE: White Pen Dream

in #art6 years ago

You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

When putting your pen or pencil first on paper, a million thoughts and ideas rush through your brain, each wanting it's own spotlight, but as you're sitting there wondering what to draw, a few ideas combine and grow forming something good, something great, even extraordinary.
It should be its own instead of it's own.

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Thanks for the correction! <3