OMG! This is sooo good. I'm already a huge fan. The way you portrayed the character with just a few lines is impressive. Wish I had thought of that organic cloak before! You nailed it!
I draw a comic I have been sharing here on Steemit for 2 years. I sometimes have a hard time finding a catchy punch line too...
Anyway... You got yourself a new follower. I resteemed your post too because it's such a good one. I'll check for some more! ;-)