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Hey ^^ I like your drawing; however, I wrote some suggestions that might help you present your art better.

thank you so much @kristyglas, GOD BLESS...

Welcome ^^
Like I said, there will be even more tips a bit later :D
Edit: https://steemit.com/art/@kristyglas/improving-you-posts-and-getting-noticed-artists-edition Here you go! :D