This is great @lady-idra; I love the fluidity of it and the poem is very good as well. I found your post because @trincowski featured you in our contest (I see all the comments stating that too :) Feel free to join us next week with an entry of your own.
I'm also submitting your post to c-squared; hopefully they will pay you a visit :)
for stopping by and for referring my post to c-squared.Thank You @lynncoyle1