This looks AMAZING!! I especially love the expressions you use for these two characters. I think this style of art would work well in a comic book, especially for a Western audience. Keeping it monochromatic would look great!
I think if you made the lines slightly more cleaner, color would be fantastic too! I don't know how to do monochromatic at all. XD
Thank you. My thinking is that there would be color, but I would use various colors for various places, scenarios, emotions, times of day, etc.
I think I still need to strike that balance of loose line work and very deliberate. I was experimenting with that concept on the panel sample there. I really like some looseness to the art style. Just my own personal taste.
Oh, sounds great! :) I think that would be amazing to see.
Good luck! I look forward to seeing it. ^ ^