What a great comic, and you actually think this is bad enough to delete from your website? Are you mad? XD
I can totally understand why you felt proud for making this little story because I would feel.... ACCOMPLISHED if I make this. All the details are very lovely and you manage to tell the story in a few pages, which is great because I like effective and efficient story telling and you have it on display here.
Crazy woman you are... hahaha, crazy talented :).
I mean I'm still proud as all heck of it but it's just not representative of the work I'm producing now. It was time to let go :')
One of the other reasons I want to redo it in the future is that one of the assignment restrictions was that it had to be told in 5 pages. So I feel there are some moments I'd like to slow down a bit. It could probably benefit from being an 8 page story.
But thank you :))))