Page 4 of my comic!

in #art7 years ago (edited)

This one I had a lot of fun making! If it ever goes to print I may touch up a few things but overall Im really happy with it.

I debated putting some text on this page but I think it can work without it but let me know how you feel about that in terms of story (if you are even reading it lol)

I am including the first really rough sketched of the page layout because it shows how far this page has come.

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Damn i'm really liking where this is going, got me really interested in the variables of this world and how civilization now operates. I think your newest page def works without any dialogue or narrative... basically o fuck that guys is big time to run hahaha, but it might be nice to have a small panel on this page that shows her jumping out the window or how she left the house so quickly... just my 2 cents, this shit works super well the way you have it now too. Can't wait to read the next few pages and see how this plays out.

This the graphic is really great. I hope you can do a full story out of this. Let's bring back the old happy days of Comics!

This style reminds me a lot of the older Dark Horse comics. Like Aliens, some of my favourite!

Technical aspects and behind the scenes stuff aside...that is just a flat out great composition!

Appreciate that! one of those times when you just stumble upon it and I was happy with it as I worked on it.

Seems like I'm only ever happy with a composition when it's something I just happen to swerve into. Planning one just never has the same energy too it.

Looks awesome. Why is she using the mask? Is the air toxic?

Thanks! yes in the swamp its toxic :)

Mmm very nice :) A bit of Nausica inspiration?

You are truly gifted mahn! Comics are growing on me thanks to you and @saywha though each time I see your work it inspires very different ideas. Story telling!

Thank you for sharing as always :)

Absolutely phenomenal sir , thanks for sharing it with us all.

Amazing work! I really love it.

Very cool! Cant wait to see more of your comic. I wonder what the creature looks like in the light...

Wow I really like your comic, do it has a name? Continue drawing, you do it very well!

love your work would love to see a drawing process on dtube and wanna like up?

From my own perspective I believe you are doing a very good work, and I would've loved to say it's perfect but nothing is ever perfect, for the stories they easily get readers turned on, you just have to keep up with what you are doing.

Thanks for sharing with us I really enjoy reading your write up comic is one thing we the steemians need most to keep the blog lively, am into video editing you can check my blog to see some of my videos.

I am a caricature lover, comics, graffiti drawings that are almost good, and the contents of the story is almost good, I will continue to follow, hopefully there will be a more perfect caricature@steemitadventire

Your painting and story is amazing keep work like this..

Really amazing and your post reflects that you are really talented comic content creator and this is really reflecting great and epic moment of any famous cartoon, this means your work is reflecting really professional. And i saw few comic or cartoon content but this stands really different and the all content is really eye-catching. Thanks for sharing this post with us and wishing you an great day. Stay blessed. 🙂

your comic is very well bro

You really are a good artist. It looks playful and unserious at first, but the ends was magic. But I think even if it is going to print i don't think you need to do more touches. It look perhaps as i see it now.

Well done.

This is so awesome. You're the real deal @steemitadventure!!

Lovely stach .you have great talent of art wish you success .

I think it looks great and so far you've done an excellent job! The story is great if you get to publish it would I like buy your comic :D

Nice painting! awesome!)

Looks awesome. This shadow monster looks horrifying. It's a good mix of text and images, almost like an illustrated book. You can get more detail to the story that way. Hope you get a chance to continue. I know how time consuming this can be. ;-) Keep up the great work. You got a wonderful channel going...

Looks awesome. This shadow monster looks horrifying. It's a good mix of text and images, almost like an illustrated book. You can get more detail to the story that way. Hope you get a chance to continue. I know how time consuming this can be. ;-) Keep up the great work. You got a wonderful channel going...